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Originally Posted by Demdike@Cult Labs  No, the bad writing was where you called the film 'Dream Man' rather than Dead Man. at the start of the fifth chapter.  |
Sorry that totally ruins the whole bloody thing now I spent an hour on that. I hate using a phone to do these things that's why I don't do as many as I would like. I spent my lunch hour on it when I could of been asleep
Apologies I really need to read over these things before I post them.